“Let’s try this again,” said he.
“What’s there to gain?” said she.
“I could buy you a coffee,” said he.
“And lead to catastrophe?” said she.
“Look,” said he. “I’m sorry about the other day.”
“Good,” said she. “Then I’ll take a cafe au lait.”
“I like a woman who knows what she wants,” said he.
“I like a man who knows when he’s wrong,” said she.
“Shall we sit and talk it out?” said he.
“You read my thoughts out loud,” said she.
“I still feel your hand across my cheek,” said he.
“As do I the marks of your critique,” said she.
“But I like your style, your rhythm, your voice in verse,” said he.
“Then I suppose I like your choice of words,” said she.
“You know,” said he. “I’d love to rhyme you line for line.”
“That so?” said she. “You couldn’t keep up if you tried.”
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Read Ryan Dowling’s work at https://appendixpoetry.com
Ryan Dowling and me have never met in person. There has been no harsh critique and definitely no slapping between us. Nevertheless, when we put our imagination together, we came up with two poets who try to fix their strained relationship over a cup of coffee.
The idea of our collaboration was born when I read Ryan’s poem Mixed Strains. Its dialogue form was something new to me. Ryan directed me to May I Feel, Said He by e e cummings, which was the inspiration behind his poem.
I asked Ryan if he’d be interested in writing something like that with me: a poem that would bring us either glory or eternal literary damnation. Laughing in the face of intellectual danger, he jumped right in.
Ryan took no chances, though, when it came to turning our repartee into a poem. He proposed a back story for our characters, gave me his first “he” line and did a great job sharpening and polishing the lines I sent him as “she”. Two Poets Cross at the Tuff Bean Cafe owes a lot to his skill and commitment.
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Glory for sure! This is great.
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Thank you, Nick! I love these two poets, I wouldn’t like anything less for them!
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Intriguing write, it’s strange and alluring.i would eavesdrop on this conversation lol.
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While we were writing it, I often pictured us as sitting somewhere nearby, eavesdropping and taking notes. I like it that you feel the same!
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So brilliant!!!! You should try this “meeting” having whisky instead!
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Good idea!
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I really liked that. So much personality came through and the rhyme was perfect for the repartee. Wonderful collaboration. 🙂
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It was! Ryan was great and I enjoyed every minute working with him. I really love how this piece turned out. Thank you for reading!
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This is brilliant!
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Thanks you, Eugenia! And also thanks for the follow!
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Reblogged this on Go Dog Go Café and commented:
Basilike Pappa and Ryan Dowling
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You are talented and I love your writing style. 💋💝
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Thank you, Ana! Ryan played a major part in this. He’s a great poet/writer. I wouldn’t have done so well in this poem without him. If you want to check him out, here is where you can find him: https://appendixpoetry.com/
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Yes I will check him out. 👌🏽
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I think you’ll like him.
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You’re so good at collaborations, B.
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This was fun too. My first collaboration ever. I still wonder at how well it turned out. Thank you, my dear.
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