Never sinking on Sudden Denouement.
by Basilike Pappa

It said sleep / the voice said / slide into / me / like a fish / in water the voice said / dreamless / I’ll catch you / just sleep it said / you’re tired and / it’s time to / sleep.
Like this / it said / the voice said / close your eyes / slide / let go / see? it said / like this / come to me / easy / you’re tired / just sleep.
That time / it said / remember? / that time in the sea / the water closed over / so close to the shore / but that current / that sneaky tricky current / it said let go / the voice said / like fish / you’re tired / sleep / easy like this / don’t blink.
And you thought / why not / easy / the…
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Stunning.
I always have to read you several times.
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Same with yours. Once is not enough.
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Hugs and kisses, luv.
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And some from me!
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Basilike, what more can I say,
than your words weaved me
like a thread caught in the
current of a sneaky tricky sea.
To then draw me safey back
to shore, then on to a raging
beach party. A living celebration.
Thanks for the invitation.
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Thank you for coming, my friend!
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Left a comment on the other site, but might as well here too. Found it very hypnotic until near the end. Well done!
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Thank you very much!
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