Bojana Stojcic on Free Verse Revolution. About time.
whatthe hell are you
areyou realorunreal
tensedortenseless
bestbeforeornever ending
don’ttorture me any more
tellme
iknow it’d be easier to be an animal
andlive in acontinual present
withno why’s and what if’s
orbe immortal sohe andicould
loveeach other throughout centuries
onlylovers left alive
aloneand forever
linearorcyclical,iwouldn’t care
justnottemporal (I hate temporal)
iwish you were just ours to share
uncountedand unmeasured
permanentlike rivers flowing to the sea
likespacewhere everything is in its place
instead, you unplugged us
youcut us short andturned us
intoahardenedlavaflow
damnyou forleaving me wondering
(eternallyorwith an expirydate? Tell me!)
Bojana Stojcicwrites and bites, like a lot, so try not…
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She’s so good.
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Very! And consistently!
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Got you! You guys talking behind my back?
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Saying nice things only… River, tell her!
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Yeah, River, tell her.
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What? Never.
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I wasn’t even here.
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I don’t even know who you are.
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Exactly!
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Thanks, B. Hugs.
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Hugs back!
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Ah, just twigged Bojana’s secret, you need a hat to write like that? Digging mine back out the wardrobe!
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I hadn’t thought about that! I’ll go look for hats too.
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See you in the wardrobe … I’ve a few!
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I may borrow one or two!
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I don’t know why, but on my screen, Basilike, but the reblogged poem displays with two and sometimes four words occasionally running together. I was “Hmm, what’s Bojana up to here?” Forced me to read it slowly. It did a freaky number on my eyes. I was still trying to figure out why she had run certain words together, what the hidden meaning was, and then I went to the original post and suddenly discovered she hadn’t — the spacing was normal. lol.
Cyclical or linear, sign me up. I hate temporal too.
So many great lines:
you cut us short and turned us
into a hardened lava flow
Anyway, this is what it looked like to me. Anybody else? I just updated my graphics card drivers and have been having weird issues.
whatthe hell are you
areyou realorunreal
tensedortenseless
bestbeforeornever ending
don’ttorture me any more
tellme
iknow it’d be easier to be an animal
andlive in acontinual present
withno why’s and what if’s
orbe immortal sohe andicould
loveeach other throughout centuries
onlylovers left alive
aloneand forever
linearorcyclical,iwouldn’t care
justnottemporal (I hate temporal)
iwish you were just ours to share
uncountedand unmeasured
permanentlike rivers flowing to the sea
likespacewhere everything is in its place
instead, you unplugged us
youcut us short andturned us
intoahardenedlavaflow
damnyou forleaving me wondering
(eternallyorwith an expirydate? Tell me!)
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You are right! I don’t know why this happened. When I reblogged, it looked fine. No one else seems to have had this problem. Today it appeared with words stuck together. I hate it when these things happen.
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Technology is great – when it works.
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No, Sean, it’s just you. I like visual stimuli when others do it. I’m too lazy for that.
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Every time I re-read this poem its so good and I’m proud of Bojana. 🙂
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So am I! She’s great.
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🙂
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